Feedback Please...

Okay, so I finally started uploading some of my stuff. I think it's being received okay, but I'd love a little feedback. Was there a part of a story that you really liked? A scene or a description? Was there something you didn't like. I wrote these stories over a pretty long period of time - did I screw up continuity anywhere? Don't be shy! I was shy on here for years and I think I have enjoyed this last week the most with the little interaction I've done.